A Poem by Brett Campaigne

at this i am well versed
I search the sky for Venus
but Mars always finds me first

And all that is before me
is my adversary
for when you are God
all you see is the Devil

© 2010 Brett Campaigne

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What a powerful piece! Echo though I do the chorus plaudits, it does not make it any less true. I will leave aside my own interpretation of your words, for I fear they will be different to your intentions. I will say instead that this piece is a symmetrical nexus of power most portentous, and mayhap you see in it the end of power so splendid, in a moment a twinkling all utterly ended? No? Alas I fear my own interpretations have crept in. In any event, this is sublime.

Thank you,

Posted 7 Years Ago

Love the references and contrast within those- and def the first two lines.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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what a powerful piece..capturing an intensity in just a few lines...outstanding..

Posted 7 Years Ago

Love the flow, it's strange how that for which we search, is often that which we discard, in our rush to become that which we already are.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Wow, I can't even begin to fathom the depths your words flow into.
bringing together elements of divinity and blance in opposition.
this is written with an amazing scope to celestial ponder. excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago

mystical beauty threaded through elemental divinity~
how true your words do ring~

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow-- let me use plain English--this was a kick-a*s write...

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 1, 2010
Last Updated on December 1, 2010


Brett Campaigne
Brett Campaigne

Halifax, Canada

Diffusion When it's crowded in here thats when i like to go outside more..


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