Sunset In The Tropics

Sunset In The Tropics

A Poem by Illegitimate Artist
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Entry for Haiku Sunet Contest

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Palms turn to shadow
Burning orb kisses the sea
A summer sunset

© 2008 Illegitimate Artist



Author's Note

Illegitimate Artist
You couldnt fathom how long it took me to arrange these words correctly... Blah...

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Another truly wonderful haiku. You have really captured the grace and beauty of a sunset and put it on paper. This is one of my favourite poems of yours.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I know what you mean about arranging words...sometimes takes me forever.

I love this piece. Normally I don't like this style but this one's really good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is nice.

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the poise of this Haiku you have created id original.
Nice

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nicely written, dear.
Poetically sound and all
You win at Haiku!

How's that? haha Sorry, amusing myself! Great job for real! And very visually beautiful! I enjoyed it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I have much respect for the haiku and the poet who can master it.
You have done a great thing with words, and I curtsy to you in this beautiful breath
you have painted so vividly.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never attempted a haicu they seem quite hard to do. This one is very nice. Well written. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I most certainly can! (smiles)

Nicely done...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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