An Evening Storm

An Evening Storm

A Poem by Illegitimate Artist
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Love the sounds of summer thunder storms ^___^

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Rain, drops on the roof.

 

A distant call of thunder.

 

Carries me to sleep.


© 2008 Illegitimate Artist



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The beauty of a short piece is to say so much with so few words. It is not about efficiency. It is not about tight writing. This is art, and it is about saying as much as one can while saying the least. To trigger the memories that we all share, choosing just the right words, forming that moment and that image in our minds - that is poetry. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Haikus are so beautiful and artistic. You've really mastered the elements of nature in this one.

-Luke

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

so sweet, succinct, yet deep...

Posted 9 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like haiku that appear on the surface quite simple but carry heavy messages. Very well done!

Sal

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this poem. This is why I love haikus. Because it's to the point, and even though it's short, it can say so much. I'm not some poetry expert by any means, but I thought this was really good. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like short to the point poems like these . The rain makes me happy but living in southern cali we dont see much .. Good stuff

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 27, 2008

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Illegitimate Artist

West Middlesex, PA



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