ABANDONED

What happened to "for better or for worse,til death do us part"

We met when we were young

Stung by true love, we fit perfect, like a glove

You told me you would never abandon me

We were meant to be, at least that's what it felt like to me

We encountered many trials and tribulations

Which in fact strenghtened our bond

Now as time goes by, I can feel your love fade away from me

I thought you were my QUEEN

Unannounced, randomly, you abandoned me

I gave you all my life, in return you thrust a knife into my heart

Now it's beats are far apart

I stand alone on a rainy day, watching myself decay

I wish we never met

I wish I could press reset to forget.......

Reviews

[Yellow Butterfly]

There's that dark side to love that has a way of rearing it's ugly head...when we least expect it too. I'm sure it's not a reset button that's needed here.. I'd say it's a time machine... to turn back time...to go back to protect our hearts from harms way..

I've seen a softer side to you Creeper... and it's oh so scarily sweet.. :O)

[CREEPER]

What a touching comment Butterfly, you have a beautiful honest heart. ;)

[Yellow Butterfly]

Your welcome Mr C... to be honest... you did creep me out when I first came across your work... but now.... I know your just a cool guy... with a eclectic mind...:O)

Thanks for accepting my friends request too :O)

[Yellow Butterfly]

*an eclectic* typooooooooo ooooh lol

[CREEPER]

hahaha, I understand. Yes I'm just a regular guy who loves life and family. But on the flip side I like horror, haha. Oh and I like cookies and milk. (secret: I'm a cookie bandit ;) NO THANK YOU for the friend request......

[Yellow Butterfly]

I guess we are both 'welcome' lol :O)

[Jack Reaper]

well that was different from you.. i can really feel the beauty in the beginning, and the agony as it slipped away. i know exactly how this one feels, ive been there myself. though, not through a text, my god thats just cowardly!! but, our past makes us into what we are and enables us to learn from the experience.

[CREEPER]

That's right Jack. Thanks brother.

[Lily Mae]

Man.. the old reset button.. seriously why is it we can't have one? I want one now lol.. excellent write as always..xo

[CREEPER]

If I ever find one I will pass it over to you when I'm done with it, haha I promise.

[minisla]

Man that is tough

[CREEPER]

Haha, I'm over it. Thanks for the read.

[Frieda P]

A freaking text, really...and your entire life changes. Sometimes I hate modern technology. Feel your pain in this rant of a poem.

[CREEPER]

Can you believe that s**t!!! Haha. Thanks Frieda.

[RachelReaper]

I keep feeling the words replay in my mind. Powerful.

[Pixals]

So much emotion in such simple words. I love it. I feel like I can relate to each and every one your poems.

[CREEPER]

Thanks Pixals ;)

[Damien Davison]

Reminds me of a friend who's woman, who actually had is daughter, just took off... Nice write, I like how it read.

[CREEPER]

Thanks one of my first writes,pushing to write better, all in good time.

[MOON]

Poignant write , emotional . Press reset to forget good line.

[CREEPER]

Thank you moon