Spiritual Autopsy

Spiritual Autopsy

A Poem by Rob Santana
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G.O.O.D. V.S. E.V.I.L. (acrostic write #1) possible lyrics

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Gathering   together  the  chosen  ones

Organizing  the  two  faced  holy  nuns

Oracles  regurgitating  obscene  incantations

Death,  with  its  final  cancellation

 

Venomous  words  invade  my  subconscious

Salvation, worship, obey….or  die

 

Erupting  with  dire  aggression, eyes  filled  with  fire

Violent  images  received  through  voodoo  voyages

Insane  idolaters  performing  a  spiritual  autopsy

Lucifer  pens  my  obituary….”He was spiritually weak”

 


© 2014 Rob Santana



Author's Note

Rob Santana
Good vs Evil, me against both...

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Altho I find your critical judgment a little hard to stomach, I do relate to some of this message as being the reason I've never been able to get cozy with organized religion, even tho I consider myself a spiritual being. I think this is an understandable response to too much inundation in a judgmental form of religion. I take your author's note to be a sign that you are also against judgmental anything.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Total bad-assery! love the capitol letter message(acrostic), and the piece as well, a battle many struggle with. Also the title wicked, "Spiritual Autopsy" a cold piece indeed! Thanks for sharing. I can relate for my writing too reflects me battling my daemons.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading. So glad this piece had some affect on you.
I hope it doesnt end with Lucifer getting to pen your obit Rob
The battle lines drawn - you have the best intel - ergo you will prevail
An epic spiritual tapestry my friend

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

I don't have the luxury of quitting Anto. I'm fighting till the bitter end. Thanks for stopping by m.. read more
ANTO

2 Years Ago

God Bless you bro
The great battle between good and evil in a wonderful acrostic...Bravo......

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Sami.
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:).....
a very clever acrostic. I like this. the eternal fight between good and evil, if one believe in those things.
a really great one Rob.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Thank you much Woody.
Very cool acrostic Rob, can totally hear this as lyrics.
You need a wailing chorus, I can just hear it too!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ana. If I could only get my lazy self to do something with it.
Wow.... I'm speechless . ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Layi Tate

2 Years Ago

Lol I'm braced remember I asked for it ;)
Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

ask and you shall receive, lmao!!!
Layi Tate

2 Years Ago

:p you got me
Great acrostic. I'm from the rural south so I got the southern baptist tradition growing up. According to the preacher we were all going to hell when the rapture came so we were damned if we did and damned if we didn't. I don't believe any of it now

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

I don't believe in any of that either. Thanks for stopping by Baby.
Very creative and very moving and filled with emotion. The ending gave me chills, i just think the fact that you used Lucifer instead of say satan was very clever and a great use of that last line.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much Dillion.
oh brother, can i relate to this...raised catholic, all those years with the nuns and the propaganda ---

pray for your friend who is lutheran because he won't be able to get to heaven...he is the wrong religion...ugh!

fear, obedience and other wonderful nouns to describe a religion of guilt...

i totally relate and agree with this write.

jacob

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Oh that must have been so confusing. Brainwashing academy. Thanks for reading.

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Rob Santana
Rob Santana

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm of Irish/Native American/Mexican descent hailing from Los Angeles, California, born and raised. Full time sinner.....Creator of DARK REALM GROUP here on WC Instagram...@thereal_jinxx .. more..

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