NEBULOUS

Lyrics

Raging silence

 

                  Reality severed

 

Painfully punishing myself

 

Pounding fist, lacerating flesh

Leaves me colorful

Squinting my eyes to view my future clearly,

 

Nothing but a blur,

 

          Animosity    -      Rabid thoughts

 

 Transparent soul

 

          No conscience

 

I hold the skeleton key

Nothing left but sinister debris

The stench of vile matter

 

Forgiveness    -       inevitable

 

Ripping your souls to shreds

With my demented aggression

 

Fanatical worshipper

 

Bringer of pain,

your loss,

 

I pound your bones into dust

Author's Note

Lyircs

Reviews

[Wayne Rockmore]

Dark, tough, and full of boiling feeling. There is something musical about your work that I find fascinating. It has its own built in rhythmic drum beat that gives it a lot of force and propulsion. Excellent work!

[Rob Santana]

DAMN!!! I was pissed off here. This is about my parents. Very charming right? sensitive and new age, hahahahaha. Whatevs!!!

[Layi Tate]

Demented Brilliance hahahaha!!!!

[Afraa]

You two are all over my newsfeed on the home page... O_o

[Layi Tate]

Lol sorry.... just talking .... didn't realize the convos traveled everywhere ...

[Afraa]

Haha! It's funny! :D

[Layi Tate]

Lol oh thought it was getting annoying :D

[Afraa]

Rob and Layi getting annoying? Is it possible to use those words together like that?! :D

[Layi Tate]

Hahhahahhahaha!!!!! I guess not .....

[Rob Santana]

Oh trust me I can get real annoying! !!!!! Hahahaha

[Layi Tate]

Me too hhahahah! !!!!!!!

[Layi Tate]

Amazing !!!!
Ripping your souls to shreds

With my demented aggression

 

Fanatical worshipper

 

Bringer of pain,

your loss,

 

I pound your bones into dust

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning great poetry...:)

[Sheila Kline]

Oh, I can relate to this!! We want to literally tear ourselves up at times but somehow some bit of sanity keeps us from doing so!!
Great lyrics!!

[Rob Santana]

ver tiny bit of sanity!!! haha. Thanks Sheila....

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I think that this is very well constructed, excellent writing

[Rob Santana]

Thank you.

[Frieda P]

Woooo, vent it baby Creeper, it has a good beat and I can dance to it. ;-)

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Frieda.

[Rogue]

I realize you have stated these are lyrics, but I really like the way you have presented them here. The whole structure just lends itself to the emotion and fluidity of the piece.
It's just a great piece of work, Creeper. :)

[Rob Santana]

Hey hey hey! What's happening Rogue. Thank you for your comment. This one came out so easy and fast. Strange?

[quinfinn]

gotta say this....no one writes angry and scary like the creeper. this is more grounded and tangible than many of your writes though, and reaches into parts of the reader that cling to your words. nicely done, yeh, i can see this being a song...easily. great stuff!

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Quinn, I'm 40 years old and I still have some childhood anger and rage in me, thanks mom and dad, hahaha.

[quinfinn]

that's okay dude...i am almost 59 and i still have childhood rage i have never vented

[Rob Santana]

OH S**T!!!! Uummmm now that's rather strange to me, however it's show's self control. Well done!

[MOON]

Poignant full of anger well conveyed !

[Rob Santana]

Hey moon how are you! Thank you for your R&R.

[MOON]

I am well , been away for awhile. Hope you well.! Take care.