GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION

LYRICS

My anger!! Hatred!!

Echoes!! Vibrates!!

 

Nuclear blast

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

Sound waves of destruction

Retaliation, Vicious

Life stabs me in the back

 

Karma rolling back on me

 

 

ACCEPTANCE!!!

 

DELIVERANCE!!!

 

UNFULFILLED!!!

 

Screaming through the vortex

Tossed into limbo

Ghost writing while walking

Success at hand, which one??

 

OBLIVION!!!

 

No guidance

No glory

 

Useless pulling and pushing

Nothing on THEE other side

 

The great DECIEVER knights me

Hereditary failure

Innocence, pulverized

 

Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

 

Violence enslaves me

Blackened thoughts

I scorch the two-faced Snake

 

Crack the shell

Release the wretched spawn

Abuse, reality

 

CONTRADICTION!!!

 

Untouchable spirit

 

Alive in my fleshly tomb

My rage extends beyond the sun

 

GRIND ME INTO OBLIVION!!!

Author's Note

lYRICS

Reviews

[cloud]

The voice inside you is a powerful one. You are a great dark writing poet Creeper. Well done.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much Lovely..

[Dean Kuch®]

This could be easily put to music. Of course, it would have to be speed metal. Nothing else would give the lyrics the impact they so truly deserve. I think PANTERA or MUDVAYNE would do a damn good song with these. Give 'em a call, tell them DK sent you ;)

Some darkly delectable wickedness going on inside that head of yours, 'ey CREEPER?

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Dean, yes the wickedness in my head never sleeps. I actually been seeking out bands looking for some lyrics. Nothing yet, so what I'm doing now is working with some friends creating music so I can put my vocals to these lyrics. My firend has a home studio so we's working hard!!!

[Dean Kuch®]

Keep working ay it, you'll get there. If you can picture it in your head, you can do it in your life.

[Rob Santana]

What a great last sentence. Words of wisdom for me....I'm taking your words and manifesting them, check out my status bar...

[Dean Kuch®]

Thank you CREEPER! I am honored...

[Fréyjä Helv..]

You wrote this? that's just heavy. I can feel the madness spewing through this. It's cool... nice job. :)

[Rob Santana]

That's it Princess, just cool???? I'm so hurt, insulted.....hahahaha JK!! I'm actually in the studio right now creating a track with a musician friend of mine, so I can put my vocals too these lyrics!!!! SERIOUSLY!!!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

Geez creeper. You know I love you and this is heavy s**t! All of your works that I've read are. LOL. Let me hear when you're done with the song...

[Rob Santana]

I'm jus kidding, you will be the first to hear it, I promise!!!!!!

[Fréyjä Helvití]

cool. can't wait. :)

[Heather]

I see this as spoken word, hands balled in fists, standing on your toes. I think this is a fantastic call to be finally heard or wrath be had by those who do not listen. I enjoyed the darkness of this piece. Well done Creeper

[Rob Santana]

H.M. how are you!!!!! Long time no see!!! Thank you very much, for stopping by. Hope you are well..

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Intense cool crafted lyrics of a darkness and thoughts creatively weaved.

[Rob Santana]

Thank you Eric, I working on putting these lyrics and my other lyric pieces to music.

[Eric Cox]

Cool. Wish I could create music for my lyrics. I'd like to hear yours.

[Rob Santana]

I will share them with you when their all recorded..

[Eric Cox]

Cool!!!

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

This is dark! Great imagery! Thanks for sharing Creeper

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Dunne..

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Np :)

[Sirius King]

Questions???

My answers RULE!!!

Favorite Line! lol

[Rob Santana]

hahahaha, cool.

[EMMIE]

Well tell me how you really feel lol. This was RAW and angry and amazing and creative and I loved it! I love poets who are not afraid to express whatever's on their heart no matter how sick, disturbing, dark, bright, lovey, corny, etc it is. Great stuff

[Rob Santana]

Hahaha, thank you Emmie. No one should be afraid of speaking or writing what they feel.

[EMMIE]

Damn right

[ms. barrie]

Holy! F**k! this is amazingly darkly, scathingly delicious. i was going to take a break from reviewing tonight, but then i caught this on on live feed, definitely not disappointed!

--- Nuclear blast!!
Sound waves of destruction
The retaliation is vicious
Life, strife
Stab me in the back with that knife

Karma, rolling back on me
Quickly down that hill

ACCEPTANCE

DELIVERANCE

UNFULFILLED

Grab the bull by it's horns
Tossed into limbo
Ghost writing while walking
Success at hand, which one??---

i want to hear these lyrics being screamed out, esp. those lyrics. i can imagine
this would make one's ears bleed...just listening to these lyrics,let alone the music
accompanying it. brilliant write, CREEPER, thanks for sharing :) 100 to 100!

[Rob Santana]

Thank you very much BarrieJoy!!!!

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome! do you have any music *just out of curiousity* in mind to accompany this? 'cause these are incredible lyrics :)

[Rob Santana]

I actually do. It would be slow heavy guitars riffs, well s**t all the music slow lyrics sung slow as well. I working on putting music to all my lyrics that I have here. Coming real soon..... I plan on doing all vocals. Jus gotta make my way to my friends house to record.

[ms. barrie]

you're lucky, i have to use "others people's music" instrumental songs/covers cause i cannot sing, play an instrument, the only thing i do when i have much needed solitude is drum on the computer desk (try to) as hard as i can to metal. oh yes, Devil's Tritone perhaps? can't wait to hear/listen to the accompanying music you have for this...actually, i picture these lyrics being growled out lol. PM me when you upload the music for this if you want. i'm sure it's amazing :)

[Rob Santana]

I will let you kno for sure!

[ms. barrie]

great, thanks, CREEPER! :)

[KatDarkness]

very dark, love it :)

[Rob Santana]

Thanks Kat.