Prurient

Prurient

A Poem by Rob Santana

As the moon rises

into the two-toned coloured sky,

the waves begin to take shape,

 

as the angels sing and demons conspire

we walk through the graves

releasing our souls

 

we don't worship,

we refuse to pray,

our scripture, we left at home

 

we get drunk off of each other's lust

 permitting our spirits to become one with the


universe,

 

 aerial creatures wandering


 

moving into a strange phase,

we reminisce on former events

of pain and suffering, love making

 

we no longer ache,

lingering in the clouds

 

we watch demons

become sex fiends

 

I can still feel the lust between us

unable to fornicate

we curse God

 

I swear on the cross

he keeps us celibate

 

I want to touch her again,


I'm ready for our resurrection


 

she'll become your servant

after our sin

 

I swear......

 

I can remember how good it felt to be with you.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2014 Rob Santana



Author's Note

Rob Santana
Eccentric/experimental, just words I put together...

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Nice view ... I found myself being able to relate to some things .....

Keep writing your great!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Muchas gracias Layi....
Layi Tate

3 Years Ago

You are very welcome ... ;)
I like the poem it raises the question that do human Angels turn into demons when they get horny.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

hahahaha, good question!!!! Unfortunately I don't have the answer. Glad you like it. haha
You seems to have ran with a effortless tangent and it flows nicely :3

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you Wraith.
oh wow...this is really a juxtaposition of "forgive me my sins" and "i want to do them all over again"

love the conflict in this...and the dark imagery...

well done.

jacob

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

What a great interpretation to this piece! Glad you liked it. Thank you.
Wow is that really you Rob? Definitely a different ink from your pen but with that undeniable salacious flair of Creeper's writes. Just the thought alone is insufferable, where did this one ever come from? I love this....outstanding read!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

I don't know. Just sitting around and words started popping in my head. Glad you enjoyed it.
We got drunk off each others virus. Good line

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

I like that line too. Thanks Baby...
Strange and eccentric? It must be just me, but I do not find this strange or eccentric at all, but I am just a whackadoodle anyway. Two little editing questions 1) it would appear the apostrophe on demon's is unnecessary (And watch the demon's Become sex fiends) -- 2) I am wondering if you meant OUR prurient sin, not ARE? Stop by, I have some MUFFINS and MANURE for you.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

LMFAO!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!! Thank you KL I'll make the changes when I get home.
Lyn Anderson

3 Years Ago

Good. That is just the reaction I was going for.
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Well, I am pretty excited to see where this creative branching out takes us... I seem to have re-entered at a crucial time, to witness you teetering off the edge of your writing precipice... I enjoyed this dark sensual write and am looking forward to reading more. Well done, Rob!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

We'll see where it takes us. Hold on tight K, haha. Thanks for the visit.
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3 Years Ago

hehe, holding on... :)
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3 Years Ago

Well I can see now many different aspects to this piece that I Didn't before... :P
This is so darkly beautiful! I love this new experimental style, you write it very well :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you Kat. Glad you liked it.
I enjoyed this piece from you. A bit of a new twist for you. Continue to practice this. It seems like it will work out if you keep up the practice. Maybe you should

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Yeah I'll see what kinda bizarre writings I come up with. Thank you Lady Quill.

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Added on March 20, 2014
Last Updated on December 11, 2014
Tags: Experimental/Eccentric

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Rob Santana
Rob Santana

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm of Irish/Native American/Mexican descent hailing from Los Angeles, California, born and raised. Full time sinner.....Creator of DARK REALM GROUP here on WC Instagram...@thereal_jinxx .. more..

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