TRNSPRNT

TRNSPRNT

A Poem by Rob Santana
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Experimental....

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Weak-minded day dreamer

 

                        overwhelmed by his own ominous parade,

 

 

                                      he'll soon cease to operate


© 2014 Rob Santana



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Rob Santana
Experimental....

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Interesting. ... I'm curious of what you were feeling when you wrote this

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

I was extremely depressed, so yeah, (shrugs shoulders)
Layi Tate

2 Years Ago

I knew it ... I totally get it .... ;)
I'm such a big fan of the short, direct poetry.
It packs such a big punch. Nice job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

I love short poetry as well. A lot can come out of something so short. Thanks Ana.
Matching Socks

3 Years Ago

You're welcome.
At first glance I was confused but after reading it over a few times it opened it self up to me and I realized the depth this short work has. Bravo it was a success!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

When I wrote it then read it I was confused!! Just something I thought looked bizarre to me when I r.. read more
Winslow Des Totes

3 Years Ago

Anytime ;)
not bad not bad at all .

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Bizarre thoughts creep around in my mind late at night.
RayXor

3 Years Ago

its an all day attraction here at my twisted carnival
Powerful with so much depth and meaning in such little wording.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much MagicAl. Oh by the way, very cool avatar.
MagicAl

3 Years Ago

You're most welcome! And, thank you.. :)
This is short but powerful. I loved it... Not transparent at all, big bro. Loved this one, amazing job.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Gracias...
Oh I like this so much. It is everything that a short piece should be, and none of it is transparent.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Glad you like it KL. Gracias..
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Short yet powerful... I love that. Weak minded day dreamer, makes me wonder what dreams make a person weak minded? Interesting and thought provoking write, Rob. Good job, as always... :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Good question. I don't know, maybe dreams that a person never pursues. When dreams come true and doo.. read more
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3 Years Ago

It makes complete sense... I see what you are saying here...wonderful write... I like your experimen.. read more

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Added on March 30, 2014
Last Updated on December 20, 2014
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Rob Santana
Rob Santana

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm of Irish/Native American/Mexican descent hailing from Los Angeles, California, born and raised. Full time sinner.....Creator of DARK REALM GROUP here on WC Instagram...@thereal_jinxx .. more..

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