SHATTERED IMAGE

SHATTERED IMAGE

A Poem by Rob Santana
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Tortured soul

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Mirror's so eager

To expose my trangressions

 

My reflection

Bleeds pain and regret,

 

Sin is RED.....

 

Karma, is GOLDEN...


© 2014 Rob Santana



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Revealing write in more ways then one! I loved this. Those mirrors they are just trouble ;)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Hahaha, mind if I pass you my mirror? Cuz damn!!!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Layi Tate

3 Years Ago

Hhahaa! Sure .....
Silencing the mirror is what I'd like to do!
Beautiful

Posted 3 Years Ago


You explain everything in just few lines. This needs talent, which you certainly have a lot!
Specially the lines-
"sin is red
Karma is golden"
Great imagery! And a great writing :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

I'm a fan of short pieces, they can be so powerful. Thank you for stopping by. :)
Sometimes we need to cover the mirror so it doesn't show all the pain and regret, so that it doesn't show not only us but others how broken or shattered we are. I really do love the mirror analogy!!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Well said Noodle, I agree. Thank you for stopping by ;)
This is so much expression and power in such a short poem, "Karma is GOLDEN" love it, great imagery :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much Kat. I always appreciate your visit.
It reminds me of pained glass, it reflects but can hold in so much energy. That can never escape unless broken. All the red held within but eventually karma will prevail.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Interesting. Yes, I agree karma always prevails . Thanks for stopping by O.
OrangeSlice

3 Years Ago

The least I could do :)
You nailed it in just a few lines.

"Sin is RED.....

Karma is GOLDEN..."

love it!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Fréyjä Helvití

3 Years Ago

Well u better send me at least so I don't miss out on your writings. LOL. so happy to see u too...
Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Missed you so much!!!! My princess
Amazing write Rob...Very compelling, so few words
Speaking profoundly! I agree, I love the last line...
"Karma is golden!" - thanks for sharing :))

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading....
Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading..
ms. barrie

3 Years Ago

You're very welcome :))
I love this simple but wonderful concept of colour and its meanings.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you KL.

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Rob Santana
Rob Santana

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm of Irish/Native American/Mexican descent hailing from Los Angeles, California, born and raised. Full time sinner.....Creator of DARK REALM GROUP here on WC Instagram...@thereal_jinxx .. more..

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A Poem by Rob Santana



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