DOOMED

DOOMED

A Poem by Rob Santana

A failure at all levels

 

But having a desire to achieve

 

Life is torturous,

 

Death is everlasting


© 2014 Rob Santana



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That's the spirit!! Wait a minute...
What? Snap out of it buddy! It's all that heavy metal you're listening to Rob.
Would you like me to ship you some Celine Dion from Canada?
That'll perk up your spirits. Or maybe just reinforce that life is indeed torturous.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Noooooooooo!!!! Please no Celine Dion!!!! I promise I'll cheer up!!!!!
Matching Socks

2 Years Ago

Lol! I knew that would do the trick...
Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Yes it did!!! SEEEEEE :D all better!!!! Hahahaha.
I like this I can agree .....

#Piercing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Layi Tate

2 Years Ago

I'm laughing ... lol
Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Hahaha haha hahaha , damn you're to much.
Layi Tate

2 Years Ago

Lol don't even get me started ..... :p
this piece is beautiful, so touching
Thank you

Posted 2 Years Ago


Rob Santana

2 Years Ago

Muchas gracias Nafisa.
There are some days.... That lead to some ways... That eventually will push you to a brink there is no question about it, Life is not fair my Mom used to tell me, but at times you can imagine someone arranging the misfortunes towards you. You look up as if there was someone to blame but on that day "everyone has gone out for lunch". There is only one certainty though as your intimate friend passiong and decay wil not leave your aside until your time has come.

Thankyou

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Your words have left me in deep thought Rene. I always appreciate your words. Thanks for visiting my.. read more
This speaks to me.

Excellently written. In this, I would say, there is no failure.

-Cara

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Caradoc what's up bro!!! It's been a while man. Well I'm sure you know how the mind can f**k with a .. read more
Caradoc

3 Years Ago

It has been a while, my friend. And I definitely know just how well the mind can f**k with a person.
Soldier on Bro.....................

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

What's up Baby. Thank you man.
It took me a couple of attempts to find something of yours i like but it was well worth the wait. This one rocks!

Posted 3 Years Ago


RayXor

3 Years Ago

you welcome to check mine out if you like. be harsh if you must, the first man to learn to swim didn.. read more
Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

I'll definitely stop by. Thanks for the friend request.
RayXor

3 Years Ago

no problem
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Pax
a chilling short piece, it makes me view the darker sides of life and its darkest ending...
very expressive piece my friend...

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Thank you much Pax. We all endure the darker side of life at least once in our lifetime, especially .. read more
Indeed it is, life... ahh where do we even start. Death we're so afraid of but it comes one day and is our only friend in the end.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Indeed it is. Thanks for stopping by Kee.
Ouch. A little harsh, but with just the right bite.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Rob Santana

3 Years Ago

Yeah a little bit. (Shruggs shoulders)

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Rob Santana
Rob Santana

Los Angeles, CA



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I'm of Irish/Native American/Mexican descent hailing from Los Angeles, California, born and raised. Full time sinner.....Creator of DARK REALM GROUP here on WC Instagram...@thereal_jinxx .. more..

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