Souless

Fear me

 

For i am sin

 

This wrath flows through my blood

 

And controls the gears in my body

 

As sweat drips down my face

 

The existance of patience falls to earth

 

I hear only my own thoughts

 

And taste only what is spoiled

 

I follow the red

 

And i know where it leads

 

Don't try to save me

 

The damage is done

 

There is no cure for my disease

 

For i am sin

 

Forgive me..

 

 

 

Reviews

[darkgurl]

Powerful read here. I enjoyed everyword of this.

[B MacGregor]

Would like to see this in my sin-sensational contest. I love a good wrath. I become enthralled by unbridled anger.

No forgiveness.

[FocusedAmnesia]

Nice read. I really like the last two lines. Perfect way to end it.