Waterfalls of Emotions

 

Waterfalls of Emotions

Cascade over my head.

I can't breath…

All I want is to lie in bed.

Lay my head down, listen to no noise−

Feel nothing at all and hope I don't have to crawl.

Hope is nothing,

Love is a lie−

All he seems to mutter is a sigh...

 

Waterfalls of emotions

Life is just there

Hope and despair;

Love is a waist, hope is for the dumb

Any little word could help just some−

Eyes forced open,

Face is red

Frustration is everywhere

He just doesn't seem to care....

 

Waterfalls of emotions

Stomach is in knots...

Eyes forced to watch

Body craves a scotch!

Alcohol for the body

Is a friend for the lonely−

Hope is for the dumb

Why can't I just be numb...

 

Waterfalls of emotions

Tears start to form,

Head pounds and heart flops

Nothing seems to stop−

Everyone around just ignores;

Life is now an unwanted chore−

Hope sucks and life is just there;

He can't even see my glare!

Crumble like a crumb

Pray to God I turn numb...

Reviews

[Fragile Heart]

Wow. I really enjoy your writing and I can understand completely the feelings that you are having. I have read a few of your poems and they all seem to settle around the same themes, not knowing what to do and feelings so desperate and worthless. When I first began to write, these where the feelings that I always seemed to be feeling; and they always seemed to stem from experiances I had with men. but who would we be if not for our painful experiances with them. I am always looking for answers and for somebody to tell me the next step. I feel so completely alone and purposeless sometimes, even when I am with someone. It is hard to feel loved when no one understands your pain. And the most painful thing is to love someone who does not desearve it. Remember you are amazing. Keep writing and thank you for shareing.

[Wolfwind Words]

The problem with blinded friends is very dominating here.
I can relate. Only can we stand by and watch as others fall. Sometimes it takes them to rock bottom before they realize that we are there to help. If they just could get past their own inner anguish.

Nice piece! Very real worldish

Infinity's Shadow

[a Messenger]

Another great angry rant. Anger seems to be your primary inspiration. You are a great poet but I'd love to see you do some happy stuff.
I like the flow of this one.
Good job.

[~ Tex]

Ah yes, the anxiety and anguish of anger... I usually toss down some Tums, or the prescription stuff, to help settle the acid-wreaked environment that will develop in my stomach as I get more and more riled up about whatever it is that got me riled up. I'm pretty easy going, so when I'm getting riled up, most people have already committed a homicide. LOL

I think you most accurately captured the run of emotions and thoughts that we all experience when these moments come along to bite us in the a*s.

[Fran Marie]

An overflow of emotions brought forth within this poem
so deeply expressed~Well DonE!1~Fran Marie

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Great write , so filled with emotion. Thank you for sharing. debileah

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great Write. I really liked this one.

[Tenten]

read this dear and it was good then and good now, now we just gotta get you to grow into writing religiously ne?