Death of a B*****d

I hate snow... I think this explains just how much.

His blood is like scattered leaves

Strewn across the grass

Children trying to believe

His b*****d life will last

 

She stands over the body

Big round and dead

Her laugh is like Drusilla

As she rips off Frosty's head...

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Well, I've reviewed this before, but it deserves a second go! :)

Frost deserved what he got as he lay there blood a'flow
He shoudn'ta brought the white stuff, a death sentence ya'know
Too bad for him and all his followers, as onto the ground he fell
He found himself a ticket, and it was written "one way to hell"

[luvingu01]

i wish it snowed here.

[Bare trees]

I actually liked the snow growing up but not so much anymore. It looks like your hatred runs much deeper then mine, and apparently others agree with you too which is surprising. Great poem with good metaphor. Poor frosty.

[Distant horizons]

Yay, now could you go sort santa out please?

[Imperfectionist]

i love it, but poor frosty...

[Moflo]

Haha wow, what an ending! I like this piece for its simplicity and for the way you ended it, the great duality of Frosty makes it great, plus I also HATE snow. Great job.

[An owl on the moon]

This is a compelling, powerfully visual write that does express quite the hatred for the white stuff! Stunning in every way! Hope life is treating you well...

[Colin Stewart]

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[These Haunted Hallways]

lol! Oh, frig, Frosty needs a tourniquet, haha! This explained it really well lol- good job!

B.A.

[Wolfwind Words]

I loved it! That was great! I shall rejoice in your triumph with you! Snow sucks!