morning and evening

Everyday we see what nature has given to us in one way or another . I am just trying to describe it through a child's eyes!!

In the morning or in the evening
When I look out of the window
I can see the whole world
Even through a little hole

In the morning the sun rises
In the evening it sets
But the reason is to tell
Why the stars twinkle at the end

In the morning we wake up
In the evening we play
We try to picture the clouds
In some or the other way

The air is so good
The weather is so nice
Now I know why
It is called mother earth everytime !

Author's Note

I tried my best.. now its upto your reviews!

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear one .... Life is a gift everlasting.
When I read your poem, I see a
flower u unfolding in a symphony of
beauty. truly.... Pat

[Inder24]

Thanks for the review :) . It means a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

There are reasons to tell through a child's eyes. A splendid poem. ............

[Inder24]

yep :D thanks for the review :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Maitreye Deka]

Nature it is... (y) carry on :) like it.

[Inder24]

thank you :)

[Prritiy]

sweet poem through a kids eye read by a kid's heart :)

[Inder24]

The child inside me is saying "thank you" !! :D

[Prritiy]

:)