Her.

Romanticizing

I'm using her.
Using her for things
Things i cant have from you.
You.

You are something
Something i cant have
Cant have even if you wanted,
Wanted me too.
Too.

She doesnt make my heart
Heart swell
Swell like it did for you.

You. You who put the sunshine
in my cup
on a cold winter morning.
You. You who makes me feel
Like my face is on fire.
And you. You who makes me
Wonder
If i ever truly loved
Anyone else ive said those words to.

You. I miss you.

Reviews

[Asante]

This is wonderful, Kuma.

The way that the words flow, the pace of it, the way you took something typical and put your own spin on it completely; I love it.
It's almost as if, by using the last word or two of a previous line to begin a new one underneath, it came across as an echo effect. Or a heartbeat. Both of which I'm impressed by, even if that wasn't the intent!

Sweet job, Kuma. :)