A Dream And A Song

I'm dreaming,

Trying to understand love.

I'm singing,

Trying to learn to love.

 

I'm dreaming,

Searching for some meaning to life.

I'm singing,

Searching my soul for answers.

I'm dreaming,

Wanting more than my boring life.

I'm singing,

Wanting for something to do to help.

I'm dreaming,

Hoping and wishing for the world.

I'm singing,

Hoping and wishing my dreams come true.

I'm dreaming,

My reality is messed up,

My dreams are so much more beautiful.

I'm singing,

Praying that reality would just disappear,

Praying my dreams could come true.

I'm dreaming,

I'm singing.

Will I ever get my answers?

Will my dreams ever come true?

Will it ever happen?

Reviews

[Insanity]

This poem is thought intriguing for me. It was like... BAM! WHAT'S THE POINT IN LIFE?! BAM! IS THERE EVEN A POINT?! BAM BAM BAM! A WHOLE BARRAGE OF QUESTIONS OMG!

You know. I love the meaning behind this. :) Yeah, you know? What's the point? Why can't our dreams be reality? And when will we get our answers? It's an outrage. HUMPH. -_______-

Well, off topic.... Anyway, I think you may want to go over this again, because some areas feel a little bit more awkward than others, the rhythm seems a little off in some places, and it doesn't sound very right. If you get what I mean here.

Dreams feel so much more real than this reality called the 'real world'. This suddenly makes me feel really depressed, but I really liked it. So much. And I went completely off topic now... Errrrrrhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.... Okay, I think I'll leave off now.

It was a great read, lovely to read out loud. Amazing write of yours. And... out.

[Sophie]

awwww *huggles*
I don't know if we'll ever get answers...
And honestly I have no way in comforting you because there's is nothing to comfort you with....
But a really good poem, that is all I can say.........................

[EJB]

good job, really nice meaning, keep writing :)