Tears

Tears

A Poem by Inkh(e)art

Her tears were an ocean
Dripping down her cheeks
And I was the boat
That sailed on it for weeks


© 2017 Inkh(e)art



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Love the imagery and the metaphor.......however, I find "weeks" a tad forced. I mean, there is an argument that could justify it's place - an addition to the interpretation, if you will - but I still hear the rhyme as forced somehow. But clever piece nonetheless. Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Inkh(e)art

2 Months Ago

Gotcha I'll keep that in mind. It was a quick piece I wrote years ago and hadn't given too much thou.. read more

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