ONE

ONE

A Poem by InnerSpirit
"

The One - YOU knew I was... the One - WE are...

"

One

 

ONE Love... This we have created - ONE.
Living in the moment, looking into the next...
We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience.
We keep our hands on this world - we own it.
Looking into the sky, those stars immense oblivious,
we are their keepers.
We are ONE, this Love above and beyond any previous.
Consider the source never forget... Life Partners.
Let the waves wash out - reach for the Mountain Tops...
Creating everything new... the future - we use the past.
My Love is an Eternal Fire... engulfed.
Embrace our fulfillment...
Carry me...
Fill me...
I am your mirror reflection.

 

Copyright ©2008  InnerSpirit aka Writer Of Life


© 2012 InnerSpirit



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THIS was my first ever real love-love poem! I didn't understand the importance of (at times) using less words to express my meaning was truly better than vomiting it out there.

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is stunning...so soft and so beautiful...truly wonderful thoughts...very moving...a treasure to read...

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Beautifully written.....so amazingly so, I am deeply moved! Love is taken to such a new level here! xx

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Posted 6 Years Ago


This is utterly beautiful. Love the idea of being the keeper of the stars. "Creating everything new...the future- we use the past." There is a deep abiding truth to this and it gives me hope. Well done!

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Overwhelming for it is simply powerful. "We grow stronger in a faith that most do not
experience." Who would not be curious to know that!? Who could resist that!?


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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's good that you have been reincarnated on here, I'd love to see what you write like now. I enjoyed this read.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the last three lines blow me away! as Yoda would say... a gift you have...

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i love it! you HAVE done this before.....

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so lovely! Most enjoyable read.

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Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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