A Fool's Love

A Fool's Love

A Poem by Kristin
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KMP** Dated: 2008. Based on Bella's love towards Edward (Twilight)

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Vampire of the dead

Here my cry

Vampire of the dead

Save my life

 

Blood thirsty demon

With their snow like skin

Those yellow, attractive eyes

Only to lose your mind

 

Dazed, until it's too late

A nibble, just a bite

Or the end of one's life

The fangs driven in too tight

 

A dream or a nightmare

No one could tell

Except the devious creatures

Prowling all night

 

Human appearence

Of perfect complextion

Singing a song

To draw out the fool

 

Blood spilled accident

Temptation too strong

Blood thirsty eyes

For more and more lies

 

Vampire oh vampire

Make me yours

Vampire oh vampire

Let my heart soar

 

I'm a fool who fell in love

With the world's most dangerous creature

But what can my heart say?

I'm a fool at cupid's own game

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 Kristin


Author's Note

Kristin
Thinking of the new book "Breaking Dawn" I believe that's what it's called and the new arrival of the Twilight movie in December. =P

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Ahhhhh i loved this poem!!!!! I wrte poems on Twilight too, that's pretty much all i do. But yeah this was one of the gretest pieces ever!!! Awesome job!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


I read the twilight series and this described bella's feelings towards Edward perfectly.

Posted 15 Years Ago


wow that was good! i love the twilight series >.< and i think that applys to bella very well! and you to lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow I really liked that, I can't say which part I proffered most. It was all really, really, good. One of the BEST parts though, was the last:

I'm a fool who fell in love
With the world's most dangerous creature
But what can my heart say?
I'm a fool at cupid's own game

That was really well said. Great poem, on great books.
Thanks for this!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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