Invisible Love

Dated: September 2008.

By: Kristin Peter

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Can you see me?

Speak it aloud

Two different worlds

Sided with an invisible wall

I see you, but none of me

As only one way shows

The clock strikes loud

As my time is up

You fly through the door
As what I no longer see

Till tomorrow when I will look

At your perfected smile

But noticing me is the problem

For you see air and not the girl

That loves you, but can’t be seen.

 

Invisible Love

Reviews

[oranges_melt]

very...ominous. mysterious, i like it!! i usually like rhymed poems better, but this was really good! keep writing!