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A Poem by Resa

Not long did I know you, nor did you I.
Your eyes still haunt me,
Some memories are forever, Some images never die.

So sudden it was, your choice to depart.
Leaving a permanent scar on my tortured heart.

Filled with despair, then some anger.
If I had only known, you were in such danger.

Maybe I could have saved you.
At least for a time.
This burden of guilt, will always be mine.

© 2018 Resa



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Maybe i could of saved you
at least for a time
this burden of guilt will always be mine

those few lines are the story of my life with my losses in life of my sister and a dear friend 2 years ago.
the guilt doesnt go away dont let it eat you up

i like this poem and thanks for entering this into my poetry comp!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


As other comments suggest this would be a great story and it's left me wanting more. Keep going!

Posted 6 Months Ago


I want to read more! This could be the opening to a great story.

Posted 7 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Nice emotions I enjoy the way you write aswell

Posted 7 Months Ago



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