Forever True

Of course I remember you.
How can I forget,
You left me here,
Drowning in a sea of regret.
Hope has escaped me
I’ve misplaced my faith.
I fear it’s myself,
I shall Forsake.
Time flies by faster, every day.
I’ve tried to catch it but,
It still slips away.
People keep saying “ believe and things will improve “.
But it seems the things I desire,
Drift, further away ,with my every move.
I hope I’m forgiven, these things I that I do.
Those of you I have loved,
Please know it was real,
And forever true.

Reviews

[wredit.jordan]

The flow of this poem has a lullaby feel to it. It really brought me in. I like the rhyming scheme. My favorite lines were "How ca I forget, / You left me here, / Drowning in a sea of regret." There is one minor typo, there is a comma in the line that starts with "Drifter" that needs to be moved back a space. Other than that it looks great!:)