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Seasons of Love

Seasons of Love

A Poem by Mark
"

I've always been fascinated with beginnings, endings, cycles.

"
I could taste the reasons 
in the flavor of seasons. 
You ran through me 
like ice in Spring. 

I was the lone mountain 
watching a flowing fountain. 
Thirsty for love; 
you made me sing. 

Tangled up, two souls 
sometimes make two holes 
aching when cut 
where we did cling. 

Feeling your heart still, 
the healed scars fill 
the cold hollow 
Winter will bring.

© 2012 Mark


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I think this is really good.
Nice rhyme scheme.
Nice flow.
I esp like " Thirsty for you; you made me sing."
A++
~Claire

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much Claire :)
To taste the seasons, a good thought . I love the line ' you ran through me like ice in Spring'
This is a very beautiful poem of love between two souls who seem to complete each other.
I truly enjoyed your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


From the title itself, I was already hooked up to read. And when I did read it, well, I have no regrets!

Posted 10 Years Ago


brings a sense of serenity and healing. great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark, this is so refreshingly original. You have taken a subject that is written time and again and breathed life into it. "Winter will bring" these words are perfect in timing as fall is upon us and a long, cold winter approaches. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you I got the idea while driving to match the four seasons to a relationship cycle. Thanks for.. read more
You had me at the first two lines lol. This is a really good poem to read while drinking tea, looking out the window and snuggling under a soft blanket. Great way to incorporate emotion with seasons in a poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading :)
A breathtaking rendition of the circle of love. Where there is an end, there is a beginning.
wonderful write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is great my friend - I loved it. I loved the imagery and the message portrayed here.

Sorry I have not read you lately, will get back to read you more often ASAP.

Posted 10 Years Ago


s y e

10 Years Ago

Don't worry about my side Son, nothing good to read there, ha. And, always a pleasure!
Mark

10 Years Ago

you are too modest. I love your work!!!
s y e

10 Years Ago

Ha, you know me too well. ;-P jokes. Thanks my friend, I love yours too!
Love the imagery and symbolism...I like the effect highlighting your lines has on the eyes. Yes, patterns are indeed an interesting thing to observe. You get so hooked once you think you're figuring it all out, you make it your goal to break the chain...The contrast in the 4th line,

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the great comments. I wrote this awhile ago and it's one of my favorites.
Mark, this is so cool. I love the rhyme scheme in this and the message, hard hitting but perfectly done. Nice one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Mark

10 Years Ago

Thank you Jack, I am glad you liked.

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