Hurting

Am i okey 

Am i hurting

Am i okey

I don't know 

Is this real

Am i dreaming 

Oh God knows

He might help me

Oh dear God 

Am i doing the right thing 

Am i really 

Am i 

Id wish to know it too

Am i hurting 

Am i crying 

Am i dreaming 

Am i lieing

Am i 

Nobody knows

Oh God knows

Does he 

He will help me

Will he

Oh dear God 

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

You sound confused
Or is it me
Am I reading this right

One thing I am not in today
it is jua=st skipping past

I am not asleep just a confused state

I sort of like this
feel like how it reads to me
hope YOU dont mind
given you 100 marks

[Onlyme]

Emotional ride into someone feelings. Needing support, love and understanding and hoping God hears him. Could really feel the raw heartache in this poem. Made me want to cry.