Hurting

Hurting

A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Am i okey 
Am i hurting
Am i okey

I don't know 
Is this real
Am i dreaming 

Oh God knows
He might help me
Oh dear God 

Am i doing the right thing 
Am i really 
Am i 

Id wish to know it too
Am i hurting 
Am i crying 

Am i dreaming 
Am i lieing
Am i 

Nobody knows
Oh God knows
Does he 

He will help me
Will he
Oh dear God 

© 2018 Intothemilkyway



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You sound confused
Or is it me
Am I reading this right

One thing I am not in today
it is jua=st skipping past

I am not asleep just a confused state

I sort of like this
feel like how it reads to me
hope YOU dont mind
given you 100 marks

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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You sound confused
Or is it me
Am I reading this right

One thing I am not in today
it is jua=st skipping past

I am not asleep just a confused state

I sort of like this
feel like how it reads to me
hope YOU dont mind
given you 100 marks

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emotional ride into someone feelings. Needing support, love and understanding and hoping God hears him. Could really feel the raw heartache in this poem. Made me want to cry.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 2, 2018
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Intothemilkyway
Intothemilkyway

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