A Poem by Intothemilkyway

Talk talk talk
Talking some rubbish stuff and raising your voice
Calling my name out of anger 
Did you finish? 

Talk talk talk and it seems to never end 
Can you stop?
Can't you see you are only hurting yourself 
Did you finish? 

Iam tired of it i say 
You only yell back 
Screaming is your power 
Oh please shush .

Did you finish ? 

You are wrong ,iam the one who is right 
Don't let anger captivate you 
Look at the bigger picture 
Iam trying to make you understand .

You don't like that
You only want to venger out your feeling to me
Talk talk talk all that you talk is meaningless 
Did you finish? 

Only you talked ,i let you
I won't blame you,blame it on me
I will take the blame and i will forgive you
Until you finish i hope you have understood. 

Did you finish? 

© 2018 Intothemilkyway

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register


Sounds like self-hatred and disgust and anger. Like having a "good angel" on one shoulder and on the other shoulder the "bad angel". You are trying to in your head, not listen to your negative thinking.

Posted 5 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


1 Review
Added on December 3, 2018
Last Updated on December 3, 2018




I love writing . I write whatever comes in my mind. "To write whatever comes in your mind and make it a poem that is truly a poem". more..