Cheap cologne

love poem

Dream with me in seperate beds.

Let not the distance make distant your arms.

For I am with you always.

I am the soft scent of cheap cologne
that lingers upon your skin
warmed by your touch
in slow sweet caress.

Breathe deep...

now sleep my love as I once more

lay gentle on your mind.

Author's Note

Miles mean nothing when the love is true

Reviews

[IAmGhost120]

Lovely, but I have a question. Why specify "cheap" cologne? I'm just curious. This poem was very well-written; it flowed smoothly and peacefully, just like what it conveyed.

[Skin]

Excellent, now a favourite of mine
Note: I would change 'Let not the distance make distant your arms.' to
Let not distance make distant your arms. (dropping 'the')

[E.V. Black]

You know, I don't think I have ever read love compared to cologne/perfume. It was very interesting and I loved how alike the two things really were. Always close and never too far. Always there,

[Daytonight]

This is truly lovely. Love can bridge the miles. Well done.

[Raspberry Rebel]

Very beautiful hon...I'm a firm believer that love knows no distance...One could be on the moon, but when the heart calls and you get that tangled feeling inside...it's real. Cologne often brings close the one we love, wrapping us in a blanket of comfort...Sighs once again xxx

[J Todd Underhill]

You are amazing, this one speaks so much with so few words. I have had a few long distance relationships, but when I finally met the right lady we were 800 miles apart for quite sometime, and the miles did not matter at all.