Opposites

break ups

Damn the dark
             and break the glass

ignite the spark
             and light the gas

silence the tongue
             and blind the eyes

make all rights wrong
             and all truths lies

forget my name
             forsake my heart
turn love to shame
              and let us part

Reviews

[Daytonight]

I love the rhyme and form you took with this one. Very well done. Keep on penning.

[Baz]

Very nicely constructed. Deceptively intricate, given the short line length. The alternate line rhyme structure helps the whole thing flow very smoothly. Nice one.

[Lily Mae]

No way... Lily Mae wants a Happy Ending...the world has to many nasty endings ;)
In all seriousness this is a powerful and well stated write... but I still have a case don't I??? Damn romantic.. I'll die alone and a sage somewhere lol..xo