Tanka (13)

A Poem by Lori Carlson

Deep in meditation
connected to all
I am consciousness
a symbiotic relationship
with the universe

© 2011 Lori Carlson

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.	Amen. Posted 1 Year Ago Amen. Rating /100

Chris G. Vaillancourt

eloquently poetic...

Posted 1 Year Ago

Neva Flores - Changeful..

Awesome Lori. I adore the art you used. If you like this type thing visit my profile here and click the link to my stumbleupon page, there is an awesome animated gif I have at the top you are welcome to take off with if you like.

Posted 1 Year Ago

Allen Smuckler

oohmmmmmmmm! Kidding of course, I really liked this Lori, but like other poems with pictures, if we don't check the final product, it may not come across the way we meant...I started and finished the poem starting with the 3rd line, because the first two were to the right of the picture...It works with 3 or 5 lines...but much more complete in thought, with 5. Nice write, and very real for those of us who participate in meditation and yoga.
allen

Posted 1 Year Ago

dutch2lips

a great poem

Posted 1 Year Ago

Eclipsing Moon

NICE!

Posted 1 Year Ago

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Added on June 12, 2011
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Lori Carlson

Tulsa, OK

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