These Hands

These hands are not the hands
of an ordinary lover's touch,
they are gentle caresses,
soft subtle whispers
across broad shoulders
and a muscular back.
They are pure energy directed
at the center of your soul,
meant to reveal a love so pure,
so holy divine, a love
only shared between two
so connected.
They are hands to hold you,
to tremble at your touch,
hands made to indulge
in your deepest desires,
to slide down to your thighs,
to pull you closer in a lover's embrace.
They are hands meant to serve
as a reminder that this love
is no ordinary rendezvous,
but something sacred.
These hands, the purity of love,
are yours, eternally.

Reviews

[Aidz]

Graceful words, enjoyed the read :)

[Audrey Howitt]

Lovely write Lori. It is erotic but also so filled with love. Beautifully done!

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

Very smooth write and no matter how harsh my words are i always relize talent great write lori

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is classy, elegant and erotic. These hands are a magical blessing.
I loved the purity of this work.

[S.L Ross]

wow

[Mark]

the only way i have ever known that she is for me is to hold her hand....it puts everything into place. i love this poem, it is romantic and perfectly delivered with a great choice of words. a poem worthy of being published in romance magazines. hope you try that because this piece will touch many people. and that dear is what makes you an incredible poet.

[stars are far]

This was amazing and in my thought the lovers hand touch is so amazing and sweet and when your love touches you, you feel like you are healed again and you want to live forever just to touch his hands ..
love your poem so great indeed :)

[Lily Mae]

Something sacred sums it up :) Wonderful write Lori:)x

[Enigmatic Soul]

A poem that warmed my heart. Such a beautiful potrayal of love through the sense of touch. Insightful as well. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The touch of two hands give confident and show the world we love the person who hand is being held. I like how you described the simple gift of two hands create a bond for love. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote