Alone In Autumn

Alone In Autumn

A Poem by Lori Carlson





















High above the treetops
as I swing to and fro,
my hair waves in colors of Autumn.
I come here to forgive you,
to erase the memories of you,
to reclaim the season you stole.
I make no apologies for my need to escape
nor the desire to become one
with this world that surrounds me.
If you taught me anything,
it is the need to be left alone.



© 2013 Lori Carlson



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I have found that people and "events" can steal a season from us, and that it can take years to separate that from the attachment we feel to a particular time of year. We forget that it is these people and events that have robbed us, until we discover suddenly one day, on a swing, as you have, that we have reclaimed it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


A beautiful poem and the picture matches it perfectly. Many poems about getting over being hurt by someone are bitter, but yours is sweet and fresh, breathing new life into the subject yet with underlying sadness. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Great write. Enjoyed this piece

Posted 1 Year Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful words. Glad to see you about again :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


"to reclaim the season you stole" - an excellent expression. What you describe is a unique state of sadness, separation, and relief, that I think everyone eventually finds themselves in.

Posted 1 Year Ago


"To be left alone" is my definition of freedom.
Excellent poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago


learning the grace of solitude

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 31, 2011
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Tags: poetry, Autumn, renewal, forgiveness

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Lori Carlson
Lori Carlson

Tulsa, OK



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