She

She

A Poem by The Iron Horseman
"

When you meet your soul-mate...

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You see her in the flush of dawn,

Back-lit by the morning sun,

Hair forms a nimbus round her head,

You know that she's the one.


You see her in the light of noon,

Those brown eyes, that magnetic smile,

Skin glowing with her inner light,

Graceful moves, her own sense of style.


You see her in the sunset,

Blazing colours, fading to rose,

Her beauty is like that sunset,

A golden, roseate glow.


You see her in the night,

Dark, mysterious, sometimes frightening,

Her soothing velvet blackness,

Enhanced by jagged streaks of lightning.


She walks amongst your dreams,

Acts as a soothing balm,

Her touch upon your nightmares,

Yields peace, tranquility and calm.


When you wake to another morning,

She's there again in the dawn,

You remember all the reasons you love her,

And your souls kiss as the day is born.



© 2017 The Iron Horseman



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AAha...I loved the way u have defined each mesmerizing thing about 'she'.
well done..keep writing.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Wajiha.
Wajiha Nayeem

3 Months Ago

always a pleasure.
Soul-achingly gorgeous, Iron, and even more gut-wrenchingly true... A romantic poet, I see you seem to be... This ranks up with some of the best verses I have seen capture this essence... Bravo', and blazingly penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


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The Iron Horseman

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Silente. I'm more a song writer than a poet, but I also like telling stories through poem.. read more
Amazing use of words my friend.
"You remember all the reasons you love her,
And your souls kiss as the day is born."
The above lines perfect. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to the strong closing. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

3 Months Ago

Thank you again, my friend.
Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Ah! So glad she's still there at the end. So many write of loss and abandonment. This is sweet and touching. Dawn, Noon, Sunset, Night. In all ways, at all times, she's the one.
Very nicely done.

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Iron Horseman

4 Months Ago

Thank you, Carol.
I'm not sure if I want to twirl in a happy circle of bust out bawling from the shear beauty of this piece. So touching, and the rhyme and meter are perfection. In any event, you most certainly earned a deep, romantic, starry eyed sigh of indulgence.

Posted 4 Months Ago


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The Iron Horseman

4 Months Ago

Thank you, PL. I can just envision you going all dewy eyed and beautiful! :)

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Last Updated on July 13, 2017
Tags: love, romance, woman, women, life, poem, poetry, happiness, hearts, peace, bliss, beauty

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The Iron Horseman
The Iron Horseman

Canada



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Aspiring new writer. I enjoy writing stories, poems and song lyrics. In fact most of my poems are song lyrics! All constructive input is welcome. If you think something sucks, tell me so. I won't be o.. more..

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