This is what I write upon my heart

This is what I write upon my heart

A Poem by Island Hippy
"

for my husband, here's to another 10 years.

"


when I saw you
i knew that it was me
you came to find
by the smile that
was on your face

the pain in my heart
met the love in your eyes
and it melted away

when you whispered
the secrets of your soul
it was something
i had never known

every moment till the
world no longer turns,
could I repay you,
but I found a place to start

every day, every night
this is what I write
upon my heart

we both know we owe
love, we owe us
for the rest of our lives
i know I owe you me.



© 2017 Island Hippy



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Aloha my ohana! Are you home now?? I hope all ok & Lani is with you & you are happy! This is a warm and lovely tribute to him and to the love you both share. "This is what I write upon my heart...I know I owe you me".....stunning lines. Intimate, adoring, honest. God always bless all three of you!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Island Hippy

5 Months Ago

Aloha my ohana, mahalo for this lovely warm comment.

'Ae, little Izzy and I are home.. read more
Annette Pisano Higley

5 Months Ago

Aloha Big & Little Izzies,xo, so happy you are safely home! Sleep, eat, have fun, feel better! Augus.. read more
"the pain in my heart
met the love in your eyes
and it melted away"

I like these lines the most. This is a beautiful love poem which tugs at the heart strings. Feelings like these are pure bliss, I think..
Well penned. I liked the title too. 😊

Posted 7 Months Ago


Island Hippy

7 Months Ago

Mahalo Yumna :) I appreciate it.
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

You're welcome, Izzy. A pleasure always 😊
I really liked the value of the last line, the rest of the poem gives it such a strong and positive implication. Nice write, enjoyed this!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Island Hippy

7 Months Ago

Mahalo mercy party. I appreciate your visit.
since your heart found
mine I'll never be
without your love
all my days, all my heart
belongs to only you
i know I owe you me.

So tender and full of love....
Blessed are those who find their soul mates to share their life with..
Hope you are blessed with many more happy years with your loved ones.


Posted 8 Months Ago


Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

Mahalo Ria, again I appreciate your time and kind words. I agree it is a blessing :)
Very sublime tender and beautiful. Yes words are beautiful and together make beautiful poem well done.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

Mahalo, I appreciate it.
'.. every day, every night ~ this is what I write ~ upon my heart .. '

Such beautiful words... they need be etched into people's minds.. a little lovin' in our desperate world wouldn't go amiss... now, this very moment

Posted 8 Months Ago


Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

Ko ku'uipo emmajoy aloha oe, mahalo nui lo, lau'lea kakahiaka.
You're very sweet, many thank.. read more
emmajoy

8 Months Ago

Your words, even in my voice, read so beautifully - they caress thoughts of how love can be mentione.. read more
Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

'Ae, (yes) they must always be sincere. I appreciate your generosity. Good night from me my friend.
I liked this poem. Many good statements would make a good title. I liked the journey and the hopeful ending.
"the pain in my heart
met the love in your eyes
and it melted away "
I understand the above lines. I was saved often in my life. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

Mahalo Coyote, I agree and appreciate your time and comment.
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Nice to see love on the beech. Hope it lasts forever.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Island Hippy

8 Months Ago

Mahalo Paul, I appreciate the drop in.

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