Made for you - a conclusion

Part two of the poem "Made for you"

How much do you love me now? I ran but came back in style. My silver promise found its mark as you descended quickly into the dark. Not a tremble nor a quiver as I lovingly pulled the trigger. I wore your favorite shade of lipstick, you said it made my lips irresistible. Revlon Super Lustrous "Wine With Everything #525" how thoughtful am I? You were so mesmerized you shut your damn mouth for once. Wine with everything, Revlon, those clever b******s... so a toast to you my darling. "I have not one word of comfort. You deserve this. You have killed yourself."

Author's Note

"I have not one word of comfort. You deserve this. You have killed yourself.", Emily Brontë, Wuthering Heights.

Reviews

[B]

Waw
i am speechless
what a thrilling piece ..... i like the lipstick touch
love revlon ;) - and i must say they got a very smart marketing strategies with their names for lipstick :P

[Island Hippy]

Aloha, yes they have quite the marketing machine. I do love the name of that particular shade :) Mahalo for your visit and generosity

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

OMG- Silver bullets and irresistible Revlon #525 lips- a smokingly lethal combination! And then zip up the bodybag with a classic Emily Bronte epitaph- "You deserve this. You have killed yourself." -Izzy ohana, you blew us away! Brava- take a bow girl!!

[Island Hippy]

Haha .... Aloha my ohana, I did enjoy writing this little daydream. Mahalo much xo

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You are so talented my ohana, and your heart is so pure. I am so proud to be your friend. I wish you peace, joy, sunlight and all God's blessings!:)

[Island Hippy]

Aww Mahalo, I'm so pleased that we have crossed paths x

[duff]

Oh damn! Haha! I love this. Mad skills Izzy and on the fly too. This put a huge smile on my face:)

"Not a tremble nor a quiver as I lovingly pulled the trigger.

Great line and awesome job my friend! A skillful and clever piece.

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend :) you're too kind, I wish it was on the fly .... it just didn't get any reviews until tonight haha .... but when I read your 'lipstick' poem I thought you might appreciate this. Mahalo much x

[duff]

Regardless a dope piece that was a pleasure to read:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I really loved this poem. You set-up perfect places and create visions of people unafraid and swimming in wonderful places.
"You were so mesmerized you shut your damn mouth for once."
The above lines. Needed more. Silence is where we swim in the utopia of happiness. Thank you Izzy for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Island Hippy]

Aloha John, your generosity is overwhelming but received with much gratitude :) Mahalo much my friend x

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Izzy.