In the morning

In the morning

A Poem by Island Hippy

so much love


in your pitter patter feet


my hands they do meet


makes smiles in my sleep, &


contentment washes over


me with each new day


so much joy as the night we greet


i'll take you flying over seas,


and wondrous things


in the morning.

© 2017 Island Hippy


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You are just good... no I mean excellent.... keep on writing I am fully in your back

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Mahalo again I appreciate your visit and kind comment
Sweet baby "pitter patter feet"-so tender -like butterfly wings inside his beautiful mama...eloquent words inspired by the life within. "I'll take you flying over seas and wondrous things",- exquisite imagery- ...wishing you both safe travel, health, joy, love and blessings my ohana.xo

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Mahalo my ohana, love your comment. It really does feel magical, I find myself constantly smiling wh.. read more
Such darling words, written only as you can write them, Izzy. Hope the 'pitter-pattering' stay still as possible whilst you're travelling.

Pray that your travels go smoothly, calmly, especially as you arrive in the UK. Wish I could be there to greet you, your big darling plus, put my ear to that ticking heart a'waiting. Gentle hugs and - thank you for sharing your sweet, sweet words. xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha ku'uipo :) big smiles reading your lovely words ... like a warm hug! (6am) Sunday in Singapore.. read more
emmajoy

6 Years Ago

Aloha, sweet Izzy.. Wishing you and your very precious cargo a restful fligh. Hope you manage to rel.. read more
it will be quite the meeting when it happens...

this is truly heartwarming---such an outpouring of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

'Ae it will be :) Mahalo Jacob
To watch a baby growing up is pure pleasure. You capture that so sweetly here. Lydi**

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha Lydi, 'ae I can't wait to meet mine. Mahalo for your time and lovely comment. Izzy
Oh this is so sweet! How I miss those pitter patter feet! ( My daughter is grown ) Your words warm my heart. Thank you for the smile today. :) Julie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha Julie :) I can't wait to hold those pitter patter feet I'm still growing my little guy. Mahalo.. read more
MsJewel

6 Years Ago

Congratulations! Hugs, J
this is lovely, thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha Cory, Mahalo for your comment :)
The sounds of somekind of love in the morning. This is like mist in that it flows over the reader and gently settles on the surface of the mind. Before starting the reader to wonder. I love it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha Ken, my unborn child and I are heading home via the UK. Stuck at Sydney airport at this very m.. read more
Ken Simm.

6 Years Ago

Congratulations dear friend. I think you will find the Uk is not the same as you left perhaps. Certa.. read more
Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Mahalo :) I'm very much looking forward to seeing my family especially my grandparents they're getti.. read more
Oh this is lovely. I love how each of your words convey the love you feel for your child. True meaning of contentment is what I find here.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

lol well idk about that :P hopefully he/she won't ;) :)
Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

He's been pretty good actually I've felt good thus far. People do give me sympathetic looks though l.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

Ahh but people suck...
Ok this one still has me wondering. The 'pitter patter feet' immediately took me to thoughts of a child or even a dog but certainly not a lover?
Whatever you capture the feelings of love and how it affects our sleep and helps us awaken feeing happy to be in the world.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Island Hippy

6 Years Ago

Aloha John, my unborn child giving plenty of loving kicks :) we are most certainly happy to be in th.. read more

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