Listen

Listen

A Poem by Island Hippy


i'm sipping on
a week of love
in a single smile.

my souls delight,
somewhere
in a foreign rain.

i left you there,
in the night
you slept, I wept.

there were lights
far away lights
around me.

i thought i heard
your voice
in the distance.

i close my eyes
and feel your lips
so close to mine.

you're always with me,
listen, can't you hear
the beat of my heart.


© 2017 Island Hippy



Author's Note

Island Hippy
For Lani.



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I love the romance. lovely write thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Island Hippy

1 Month Ago

Much mahalo Roxane I appreciate that. Izzy
so romantic and peaceful to read ..how very strong the mind is to recall and we feel in the recollections .. really love this:
"somewhere
in a foreign rain."
and this:
" far away lights
around me. "
i feel warm in the love you portray in "Listen" and closing with the title gives that title as much importance as the poem ..well done..so enjoyed the experience hippy girl
E.


Posted 2 Months Ago


Island Hippy

1 Month Ago

Mahalo for your lovely review, I so enjoyed reading it. Izzy
this is a most sincere, stirring, piece, that leaves tender sighs upon the reader.

my favorite lines are the third stanza and closing stanza.
lyrically gorgeous ink your pen spilled. thank you, so much for sharing -- xx

Posted 5 Months Ago


Island Hippy

5 Months Ago

Aloha my friend. Mahalo I appreciate your generous words. It's lovely to see you about the cafe xo
ms. barrie

5 Months Ago

you're very welcome...my pleasure (:
A sweet write if only heart's beats sent love echoes to reach afar.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

Mahalo for the lovely comment very much appreciated.
my ohana, this so intimate and filled with love for your Lani. "Sipping on a week of love in a single smile"-Your beautiful words evoke the aura and glow of true love that surrounds the two of you. We hear all three of your heartbeats clearly. Thank you for allowing us to know you. Perfect. Xo

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

I aloha your gorgeous comment ohana. Mahalo much for your visit, you're deeply appreciated xo
That is a sweet dedication for your husband, Izzy :) I love how your words dance off the page brimming with love and sincerity... it's good when words cover the seemingly infinite distances...

A very heartfelt write.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

Mahalo for your lovely comment Yumna
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

You're welcome, Izzy. A pleasure always 😊
Soulfully poignant, as Jim Reeves would say,

' I hear the sound of distant drums
Far away, far away
And if they call for me to come
Then I must go, and you must stay'

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

Aloha Tom, Mahalo for your great comment and time. Much appreciated. Izzy
I liked this poem. I like the places and the thoughts in the poetry.
"i'm sipping on
a week of love
in a single smile. "
The above lines. So good. Thank you Izzy for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

Aloha John :) I deeply appreciate your generous visits my friend. Mahalo much
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

I enjoyed this one dear Izzy. Was my pleasure to read your work.
Wonderful. I'm filling up now.
A lovely poem to missed love.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

'Ae, mahalo for your lovely words Ken
Aw Issy, distance is just a kiss away.
You still bouncing.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Island Hippy

6 Months Ago

'Ae still bouncing :) in the UK for the week and missing someone quite badly... haha. I think it's t.. read more

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