Sweet things

let me bloom
in the garden
of your love
where we grow
tangled roots
never to part

we should walk
in the sweet
summer rain
& talk as lovers do
of miraculous
glorious things

i'm singing of
my hearts delight
and it booms
shattering the sky
transcending across
another timeline

pon the grass
lay down with me
hold my hand
and whisper
sweet things.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love this so much
This is true Beauty

[Island Hippy]

Aloha juliespenhere, mahalo for your lovely comment. Izzy

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Aloha my ohana! I hope you are well and happy! love your poem- sonnet..."shattering the sky ..transcending across another timeline"- powerful and tender...Lani will be with you & Little Izzy very soon.:)) I am with my family in Adirondack Mountains for the next two weeks. Internet here is intermittent so I post when I can...xo

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my ohana! Not long to go now & things are much better. Mahalo much! I hope you have a wonderful time in that beautiful piece of earth. Enjoy your family. Aloha always xo

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

So happy to hear xo!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is beautiful! I love the touch of sweet romance in this piece.
Kind of reminded me of the song 'Set fire to the rain'...
Lovely writing, Izzy :)

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend that's such a lovely review, mahalo very much :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome, Izzy! Always a pleasure reading your works 😘😊

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A romantic and heartfelt piece there Izzy. Love those tangled roots but watch they do not restrict you both too much lol!

[Island Hippy]

Aloha my friend :) haha love your comment, I must be mindful of that. Mahalo for dropping by x