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Some pain, no gain

Some pain, no gain

A Poem by Ithacup
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I know writing a poem about losing your virginity is kind of emo and stereotypical, but i felt like writing this. It's in villanelle form.

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What’s a little pain?

It’s supposed to hurt the first time

You don’t want to be the one who abstains

 

Everyone always says it’s like soaring through rain

Like it’s gods gift to mankind

What’s a little pain?

 

You can even feign

You were the one who said it was about time

You just don’t want to be the one who abstains

 

Afterwards all you do is change

Put yourself back into real life

What’s a little pain

 

Don’t even worry about their aims

You’ll find out when they bend the lines, give no signs

You don’t want to be the one who abstains

 

It’s all the f*****g same

The memory will fade in time

What’s a little pain

You don’t want to be the one who abstains

© 2011 Ithacup


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i agree creative.

Posted 8 Years Ago


very creative.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is about the pressures of having sex at and early age or it is just my guess anyway. This flowed nicely and was written creatively

Posted 8 Years Ago



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