Promise Me Another Summer

About my brother that was killed last year.

The sun and I will watch the night fall alone tonight.
Its only at the moment of day and night as they peacefully share the sky
will I have that feeling you've been watching me and hear my thoughts screaming as I lay here in this empty silence.
So many memories we made and so many more I wish we could have created.
You still speak to me through a number that will always be your other name.
Promise me you'll speak to me through the thunder this summer
and touch me with the rain like so many nights we spent on that pier during a storm while sharing stories of girls, bikes, dreams, racing, and just sharing that last beer.
I want to believe that ill see you again so don't forget me when its just another lonely night. Miss you Man!

Reviews

[Justine]

I really really loved the images this piece brought forward. I loved the opening,
'The sun and I will watch the night fall alone tonight.
Its only at the moment of day and night as they peacefully share the sky' the depth of it.
I'm sorry for your loss but I love the way you remember him.

[deeps]

I am so sorry.
This is well expressed emotion here.