Re-Do. Re-Done

Re-Do. Re-Done

A Poem by J. Hampton
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1st of 30 it's poetry month

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A second chance is Heaven sent
A leap of faith
Without the net
The re-do ... Re-done
Some never get

To reinvent
The who... We were
So that
The who .. We are
Might soon concur

That what
We Can't ... Do
We Know ...God can
Erase the past
Remake the man

Never dismiss change
As impossibility
Miracles follow Epiphany


© 2013 J. Hampton



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I do feel the rhythm in this; concise and powerful. Thanks.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Really cool poem. I love the word play in this. I agree with Designer, the beat was what made this special.

Posted 1 Year Ago


J. Hampton

10 Months Ago

Thank you... Rereading it .. I think it's too cheesy
Congratulations! The beat makes it strong...drove it! God uses everything- to make us better! "Erase the past-remake the man" Brilliant imagery!! It is perfect, could be used in a daily devotional to motivate!

Go girl!

Posted 4 Years Ago


J. Hampton

4 Years Ago

Thanks more than you know
I have more poetry traipsing through my head
Aloud than will e.. read more
love it!

Miracles follow ephiphany- perfection!

Posted 4 Years Ago


J. Hampton

4 Years Ago

::: Melba :::
Indeed indeed. Missed my WC folks so much
Thanks
I love this. I would love to hear it spoken. it has a flow to it - a cadence. And well of course the message is spot on! You know especially that last verse. Its song worthy. Well done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


J. Hampton

4 Years Ago

A ramble ... And attempt to word ...Grace
Glad you enjoyed .. Thank you
very well written thoughts you have penned
I am a lover of change it ads spark to life
I like the format the pauses the natural reading of this
like that title much it grabbed my interest
thank you for sharing

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Hampton

4 Years Ago

Thanks Holly .... It was an amazing morning ...
Ironically being the day after Resurrection S.. read more
i fully agree, well put and very well written. i really enjoyed this piece. good luck with poetry month!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Hampton

4 Years Ago

Thanks
Only 29 more to go,

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