One missed email

One missed email

A Poem by JC Fox
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I decided to be random and make fun of the One Missed call movie and make a deranged one missed email poem

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I logged onto myspace today and saw the email
 
It was from you and I couldn’t believe it!
 
I was excited
 
I mean really excited
So I hit the reply button and waited for a response
Weeks went by
I thought my world would end
Another two weeks I kept checking out your page
I wanted that email so bad and it just wouldn’t come
I checked my sent and it said that it still wasn’t read
Three weeks and no response
My world has come to a tragic fiery end
I keep going back to your page over and over again and again
You updated your page but still my email went unread

FINALLY two months, 3 days, 12 hours, 45 minutes, 260 seconds later I get an email back

All it said was hey how are you what’s up?
What’s up?
That’s it?

My world came tumbling down as I thought about the email in which I poured out my little heart and soul

And still it went unread
One missed email
I will never do this again
Good bye cruel world
I hate myspace
One missed email and that’s all it took
For my little world to crumble
One missed email
Now to go be all emo and write bad poetry
One missed email
Dude I’m so over it screw you

Yet I still go back to my sent box to see if the email has been read

IT STILL SITS THERE UNREAD!

© 2008 JC Fox


Author's Note

JC Fox
Just for the record I'm weird but would never freak out like this over an email LOL just so everyone knows I'm not a total nutbar!

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It sounds like this poem was wrote by a stalker over myspace. haha. I really like it because there are some people who act like that over myspace. You might want to change the seconds though because 260 is a few minutes lol. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


And when I read this it reminded me of a few myspace stalkers that I had

Posted 16 Years Ago


Amusing the font reminded me of a cheesy 70's porn production

Posted 16 Years Ago


THIS WAS GREAT!! I saw the Japanese version of ONE MISSED CALL and want to see the American version. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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