Glistening Diamonds of Sorrow

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Tears falling from the sky
Never ending wondering why
Some believe it's angels above
Some believe rain is the mourning of lost love

Rain in the sky falling in sheets
From the sky and the earth where it meets
Lonely and falling shimmering bright
Diamonds of mourning, noon and night

Now the sun has come to clear
Soon the rain will end it's so very near
Glistening in the beams of sun
No longer sad but a sign of fun

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Reviews

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Ooh, this is a wonderful poem. I really like it, excellent work!!!

Heather

[Dani California]

Lonely and falling shimmering bright
Diamonds of mourning, noon and night

I have to agree, this is brilliant. I loved the entire piece. Ending in hope. Awesome.

Great write!

[Prose-full]

"Diamonds of mourning, noon and night " i love this..nice twist..

"From the sky and the earth where it meets "...genius..

one of my favs from your "poetry stacks"

def a finalist in my eye..

[The Elder Pine]

I like it very much. Itis not like your other work but it shows your great creative ability and skill. It is nice to see a piece of hope and promise from you, thank you very much for sharing.

[~crazy Beautiful~]

"Diamonds of mourning, noon and night "
i love this part, and the switch play of the word mourning
Very creative wok, I love the imagery
Thank you for entering my contest

[Static C]

I couldn't connect with the sorrow in this one. The imagery was to playful and evocative. Thats what I liked. your words spoke of sorrow but your imagery had me out dancing in the rain.

[April Child]

Diamonds of mourning, I like that. Nice sad poem. Glad for the hope at the end :)

[Accidental Stranger]

Love the song

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another great write, i love how it flows soooooooo smooothly

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Good weather poem! LOL Very soulful...