Rendezvous

a little something for a contest ^_^

 

 

Pouting lips and legs that never quit

Sliding my hands up to your waiting slit

Oiled and slippery

Seducing

Licking your lips

Waiting

Aching

It started with a look

Just one

From under heavy hooded lids

Tracing your full lips with my finger tips

Moaning

Sighing

Pleasure colliding

Love of two women a sexual desire

A passionate fire

What started as a quick drink at a bar

Led to heavy petting in the car

Panting

Wetness sliding my fingers in

Finding that sweet spot

Touching

Caressing

Exploding in screams

An orgasm of my dreams

Touching with a feather light kiss

The guys always want it

Their touch won’t be missed

A lustful bounty

Scissoring

Desiring

Touching

Aching for the sweet release

Coming again

And again

Make it happen please

Reviews

[Angel's Lady]

Tracing your full lips with my finger - very nicely written. Very visual, creating a definite image in my mind.

[Cynthia Barrick (CHING..]

arent you poetic I LOVED IT

[Haden]

I'm too hot to review this!! wow! I'll fave it and get off later, i mean, read it later. ;)

[Kasey Klein]

Hello Jc.

As it sits and what it is, I like it. The words dance down the page, great rhythm, love the beat. The sounds of the words play well off each other.

A good poem.

[So sad to be forgotten]

Sexy

[*** Hey Jude***]

OOOOO sweet. Nicely written, I'm going to go find T. Later, LOL~ Jude :-) xo

[E. M. Murren]

This is a sensitive erotic work. I enjoyed it a lot. Beautifully expressed. Cheers.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ooo la la .. very sensual ...
Nice one J.C.

Chloe
xoxo

I am in love with Johnny Depp myself .. lol .. ty for your review.

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Seductive piece here, different for you, as far as i know. Nicely done though!


Great Write!!

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Very seductive...good job! You should enter this in a contest! (Another blond moment creep up on you?)
Their touch won�t be missed - you got that right! hahaha
Good job, JC.