Can't You Tell?

This is one of my earliest rap love poems that I ever wrote.

When I see your face full of tears,

you know that I will drive away your fears,

my words full of love can make you dry your eyes,

but my words can also take you by surpise,

my words are full of love but they also have concern,

with my love to drive away your fears you'll learn,

that with me you dont have to be scared,

because your fears I have always beared.

I love you so much I can't bare to see you on your knees,

that's why I have braved these violent sees,

to be there and catch you when you fell,

i love you so much really can't you tell?

Author's Note

This is a rap poem with a steady beat.

Reviews

[ajasminewallflower]

Sometimes people really don't know if they are really loved until its too late unfortuantly.I loved the frustration in this rap/ poem about making that person actually see how much you actually care. Great write

[Viola Thoreau]

this poem is truly breathtaking; making a girl's heart melt.
It makes me want to just shout out,
"I love you so much too...".

What a great poet, your hand and heart.