A Lost Friendship

A Lost Friendship

A Poem by J'Eliot



A Lost Friend$hip


I remember the times,
You turned up to me,
Full of trust you had in me.


I remember the days,
We spent together,
The special moments,
We shared with each other.


I remember the moments,
You reassured me,
Of an everlasting friendship,

 A lovely relationship.


Our friendship stands,
Among all the promises,
We couldn't keep.

 
I am waiting for you,
But, I don't know,
When you'll turn back,
When you'll come back?



-J'Eliot

© 2013 J'Eliot



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I can relate to this well actually. Over the last few weeks my very best friend and I are....Well, we don't speak anymore.
I liked the font and the layout, the flow and style were done splendidly. Great write.
-Infinity

Posted 4 Years Ago


I can totally relate, I've also lost a very dear friend, indeed she was my best friend at the time, so I know how that feels...
I really enjoy your poems, keep up the good work :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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That feeling can stay with you for years. S when I read it I felt that pain come back.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Like the jumbled up and big font you've used and more importantly the style of the strong and simple message, I enjoyed this

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J'Eliot

4 Years Ago

Awww....
This's called true love, it shows frm ths blw one stnza

I am waiting for you,
But, I don't know,
When you'll turn back,
When you'll come back?...lvly phrse, i lvd it, ncly penned.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J'Eliot

4 Years Ago

I am glad to hear this. :D
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I loved it. It did make me want to cry because they is waiting for there friend that has gone away.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J'Eliot

4 Years Ago

I know how it feels.
Full of emotions :)
I loved it!!
Friendship is hard to built and impossible to forget...
Keep writing!!

Your Friend
Akshat

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J'Eliot

4 Years Ago

Thank You for the review! :)
Akshat♥

4 Years Ago

You are welcome dear :)
This is a great poem, really. I think it could be put to music really easily, but it's great on its own. You can really feel the rhythm just by the words themselves so I think you should make more poems like this one.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J'Eliot

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Reviews like this boost up my confidence. But I had written this poem when I was .. read more

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