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A Poem by John Morris

One of my friends has been manipulated by teachers trying to get her to do what they want; some even sexually. I was sickened so wrote this.

Euphoric; away from needles

Digging into your brain. Eating

Away at the things you hold close.

Words slither from their mouth

Brainwashing you. They are teachers;

Making you dance to please their appetite.

© 2009 John Morris

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Lorraine

Short but brilliant. The words just flow out naturally to express such strong descriptions. The theme is already gruesome in itself, but you managed to take it into a whole new level, where some teachers' disgusting actions were expressed with greater impact. Well done, indeed.

Keep Writing. ^___^

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Ameerah

ur poem is great!! i love it

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Lorraine

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Faith

amazing job john, it really made teachers seem like animals...your point really came out perfectly.
"Making you dance to please their appetite."
- i absolutely love the last line, perfect ending.
such a strong piece.
brilliant write : )

-Faith♥

Posted 4 Years Ago

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BluesForTheRisingSun

Wow. This was very powerful, extremely poignant. By far the best of the snippets. Excellent write :)

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Added on June 5, 2009

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John Morris

Cambridgeshire, United Kingdom

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Hello Everyone. I know it has been a long time since I last was online but now I am back and ready for it. I have a load of new work from the past year to put on the site once I have done final edi.. more..