A Journey

A Journey

A Poem by Joey Nizz

You've embarked on a new journey
To find out what sort of new journeys your life will offer

A journey of finding yourself
A journey of love
A journey of lust
A journey so pure
A journey you'll never regret..

A journey of freedom
A journey of happiness
A journey of sadness
A journey you'll never forget

The extraordinary and memorable times we spent with one another
Times of dispute and fights
Times of pleasure mixed with pain
Times which can never vanish
Times that sometimes can never be the same

It is time for you
to bid farewell
Time to lament and cry
and to gaze with a smile
Time to be apart
Time to carry the pain
Time to promise to stay
Time to love always

but for now

Its time for you to go beyond and sail..

© 2017 Joey Nizz



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I loved your poem 'journey' it's although the journey of our life.
It's inspiring to everyone.
Nice and awefull work

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it ^^
Rajashree Rj

5 Months Ago

Lovely to express thought
U r welcome
This is so lovely in a semi-heartbreaking way.
You took your time with it, too...thoughtful.
It's a lovely read.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you, its just how i felt before writing it.
Thanks again for your review :).
Nicely done, enjoyed :) x

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much and Im glad you did ^^
Great work, Joey...
An encouraging work. Loved the repetition......
Keep writing..:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thanks Naat!
Im glad you did! ^^
Neetha

5 Months Ago

You are welcome......
Repeated lines, and happiness drive... This inspiring little piece of work... No time to lament or cry... Well penned...

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you Silente, Im glad you think so :)
Silente

5 Months Ago

Absolutely, you are welcome...
*One and other should be "one another".
This is nice. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you for pointing it out, I fixed it! :p
Thanks for reviewing also! ^^
The journey of time. Nice chosen topic and well written. :)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you I'm glad you think so! ^^
I really liked this piece and I think that it has a lot of big strengths, with a few changes I think that this could be made perfect. One of these changes would be to change journey's to journeys, also 'extraordinary yet and memorable' to either 'and' or 'yet' but not both. These are just some things that you can use to improve this but it's still really like.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Done!
Thank you for your review and help, we can always get better as long as we have friends.. read more
You have captured life's beginning and end in few words. Beautifully written as always. Your poems are always thoughtful and inspiring. I truly like them.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thanks Najam!
Im really glad that you like this and all of my writings, you have been a great.. read more
Najam Us Saher

5 Months Ago

You're most welcome ☺
Sweet poem...............

Posted 5 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thanks Jes'Pi :p
Im glad you think so! ^^

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Added on April 29, 2017
Last Updated on May 27, 2017
Tags: Journey, Love, Purity, freedom, happiness, sadness, pain, fights, cry, lament, smile, goodbye, farewell

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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