One Day

Honestly, I dunno how long has it been, Iv'e lost track of the days, the time, lost track of myself

And

It was sad when you walked passed and pretended that I was never a big part of your life

As I watched you walk by someone asked me if I knew you and a million memories flashed through my mind that kept me idle and later smiled and said "I used too"

It was devastating to me to see you again and to recapture all those memories again that never left that I thought that died

But

Just because we're not talking anymore or seeing each other no more

Doesn't really mean I've forgotten all about you, or forgotten the days that we've shared, it doesn't mean that I no longer care

You know, truth to be told I still do. I try to do my best to check up on you, just to see if your okay and to see how you're doing.

But every time I yearn to talk to you again, it comes back

Everything that made us stop talking in the first place just comes back to me and all of the sudden it hits me, it just hits me that we're strangers now, you don't want me in your life anymore

Hence the reason I'm no longer a part of you, no longer apart of your life no more

But hey, even though everything has changed; I just want you to know that,

I'm still here, I haven't gone anywhere, I'm still the same person you have walked away from that always have been there for you and still is

I'll give you a shoulder to cry on, an ear, no! both of my ears to hear you

I don't care what am I doing or what time it is, just like the old times

Just don't hesitate to talk to me, because all most half of the time, I wish you we're still here talking to me

I just miss you're presence in my life, I miss your silly laugh and that smile right after, I miss you being my best friend, f**k it I just miss you more than you think

And can't wait for the day when you finally come back to me, as the same person before you left me.

I'm not angry that you won't come back, I'm sad because I kept hoping that you will..

One day, one day.

Reviews

[Barnaby]

Captivating dialogue but no complicated vocabulary to an extent...I think we can all relate to parts of that....resonates the sadness one has in a situation as expressed. Pleased I read it.

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much for your review :)
And yeah, many of us do feel the same or that their in the same situation. Thats life I guess :)

Thanks again fro dropping by, I appreciate it.

[Warrior]

wow this is capturing. I'm sorry that I haven't been reading or commenting lately but i had a billion exams and essays, therefore absolutely no time.
towards the end you say "all most half of the time"
but i think you meant
"almost half of the time"

any way aside from that little tip this beautiful and I've been the person who wants the other one to come back more than once so this piece really spoke to me.
Thank you for sharing it

[Joey Nizz]

Its ok I understand, I hope that you are doing well and I hope that you will.
I'm glad that it did speak to you, and I really hope that that person will.

[emmajoy]

How near tragic the words, whether fact or fiction .. is said to be contagious, There are so many moments in your tale, so many darts into the heart. And now, having read twice, i feel this must be real as real..

'I'm not angry that you won't come back, I'm sad because I kept hoping that you will..

One day, one day.'

Beautifully sad, Joey.

[Joey Nizz]

I guess sometimes it takes a little bit of imagination and a bit of what happened to create something powerful in words.

Thank you for reviewing, means so much :)

[pia]

This is so well written.
The emotions running here are wonderful !!!
Amazing

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Pia, I'm glad you think so :)

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Joey, this makes tears. So eloquently poignant, passionate, loving, raw and suffering. I feel it in my heart. You are so talented in expressing such intimate and powerful feelings. I hope that if this is your own reality, the love of your life reads it and maybe a new page can be turned....

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you Annette, your review meant a lot, and yeah maybe one day :)
sometimes the words you express on a paper can't even show the real emotions that are being felt, but one can try.

Thanks again for your review :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Emotional and heart wrenching....I can feel your pain such were your words. I truly liked this one....

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Najam, this was a long overdue subject that I wanted to write, I guess it took me long enough to realize the words I wanted on a piece of paper that formed into this.

Thank you for you review.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Heart touching work, it is more like a story and a good one, i liked that line very much
"As I watched you walk by someone asked me if I knew you and a million memories flashed through my mind that kept me idle and later smiled and said "I used too"
It's just Awesome

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Farhan, and yeah it is more of a story, thanks for pointing that, I just changed it.

Thank you for your review :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

My pleasure

[Zephyr]

A touching work Joey:)
One that represents true Love.
I enjoyed!

[Joey Nizz]

Thanks Neetha, I'm glad that you did :)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure:)