Bubbles

Bubbles

A Poem by Joey Nizz

BUBBLES!
And I'm not talking about the ones we make with a bubble blower
I'm talking about the bubble some of us are trapped in, whether it's because of annoyance, anger, depression, boredom, and heck if one bubble that has them all!
You gotta burst out of it, it's not really worth to be stuck in a bubble that'll stop us from doing the things we love or pursuing what we really want.

You see,

You will never break free from your bubble if you don't believe in yourself enough, you will only feel useless and unworthy and all of the negative thoughts will be stuck with you in that bubble you're in and that's why you are like this!

Just do it, break free break out of it, pierce that bubble and breathe and do what you love, your like anyone or even better than anyone so don't lose your self in that bubble of the negativity of yours.

Live life how you want it too no matter how many barricades or people in front of you to stop you from pursuing your dreams, your goals, pop the bubbles and carry onwards to your goals and start living the dream you always had.

Bubbles, funny isn't it? how can something that can be popped so easily, can be the thickest thing to break out from, but hey.

Its all in your head, once you let the negativity take control, your mind will make you think that its difficult to break outta of it and run towards your goals and dreams.

Have a clear mind, live positively and block all of the negativeness, have and live in a happy bubble.

© 2017 Joey Nizz



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A 'positively bubbled' life is all everyone truly deserves! *Smiles*
Beautifully metaphor, and beautiful theme :)

Life is no more than a bubble, because we know not what the next moment holds for u! It's better to live in a happy bubble therefore!
Nice thought, Joey!😊

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Week Ago

I agree with you, life is more than a bubble indeed but to see this life and live it, one must burst.. read more
Saumya

1 Week Ago

You're most welcome, Joey.😊
Word economy. Excellent sentiment but, you should re write this with the phrase 'word economy' in mind. Or change it to an essay and flesh it out a bit more. This reads kinda clunky as a poem, but it does have significant meaning none the less. It kind of exists in writing purgatory at the moment. In my opinion anyway. I'd just pander and pretend otherwise, give you a fluffy BS review but, I actually respect you as a writer so I can't really do that.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Joey Nizz

2 Weeks Ago

We all are intitled to out opinion and I respect everyones opinion whether its a negative one or not.. read more
Dead Alive Dave

2 Weeks Ago

You don't need to explain that to me, I already know that s**t or I would not have left the comment... read more
This comes at a great time... I am choosing to leave a bubble of negativity and make strides for a better tomorrow within myself... Thanks, Joey

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joey Nizz

2 Weeks Ago

Always pop those bubbles, whether its negative bubbles or anger or sadness or any of that sort, just.. read more
Silente

2 Weeks Ago

Pop goes the bubble... Hah, thanks, Joey
Joey Nizz

2 Weeks Ago

Lol your welcome.
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I'll raise a glass to that Joey, be a glass half full type and not the other

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Joey Nizz

3 Weeks Ago

Cheers, sometimes its all that needed, not to be full but half.

Thank you for your re.. read more
I'm stuck in a bubble, need a pin to burst it - good work loved this inspiring, uplifting read :)

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


Joey Nizz

3 Weeks Ago

I hope you will burst out of it :)
Thank you for your review.
break free from the bubble to show who you are. thanks for the nice poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Month Ago

Your welcome Roxane, thank you for reviewing :)
What a lovely metaphor of a bubble. You packed the meaning, inspiring thoughts in a bubble and that message carried inside it was able to reach the readers. I loved this so much, I am reading such a positive work on a very good day i.e when I need it the most. Thank you very much for writing this and sharing this at the exact time.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Month Ago

Im glad that ran into it when you needed something like this today and you are very much welcome as .. read more
Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

You're most welcome ☺
Live bubble free... :) good one Joey ..


Posted 1 Month Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Month Ago

Thank you im glad you liked it! :)

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Tags: Bubbles, negative, positive, goals, dreams

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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