THE KOEL'S MELODIOUS CALL IN THE SPRING

In the morning I heard  the Koel’s melodious call
It is a sure sign of Sneaking autumn’s fall
What a striking difference between winter and spring
It is undoubtedly  season’s eternal king

I love nature’s green saree
She smiles with an uncontrollable spree
Her saree is full of beautiful flowers
there are very many different colours

Nature’s Bindi is the glorious sun
Her hair pin is the shining moon
She cools herself with her natural fan
Her stay here might be of a little span

She sits with an yellow sarree in the palanquin
The bride groom looks at her as if she were a queen
Her beauty and shyness is her divine pride
She is a newly married mesmerizing bride
the villages are replete with ripe corn
All the birds enjoy this beautiful morn

Reviews

[Judy Ponceby]

This is lovely, beautiful, intriguing as I am unsure of what a saree is, but will be looking it up :) Thank you for sharing, beautiful write, flows lovingly.

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

Like nature, this like a breath of fresh air. Beautiful poem my friend.

[Lily Mae]

Absolutely beautiful JVL, I enjoyed this very much..xx